Today John, Odie, and i went outside to play in the snow. it was so cold outside, so we had to wear a thick coat. i decided to make a snowman of Odie and John. I took all the clothes from John's closet. he was yelling, "GARFIELD!" as usual. He had to come out naked and ask for his clothes. I was so embarrassed of him. All the girls look at him like he is a crazy person. He can just call me from the house. When i made a snowman of Odie i made him stand and put snow on top of him. it was my greatest day ever! I am excited about Christmas. Teddy is excited too!
Hey Rosse-
ReplyDeleteI like your blog. It is pretty good. You made it funny and interesting. My one comment is that by making the first sentence an attention grabber I would want to read more. Maybe try something like "He embarrassed me again today! And it was even worse than the time he _________..." then I would want to read more and more.
-Madison
HI ROSSE!!!!
ReplyDeleteI like ur entry!! Maybe you can make it more funnier or as Madison said put something like He embarassed me today! I would like to see somthing more funnier! :)
-Daisy
Hi Rosse. Your blog entry is great!!!! Keep it up. It's also funny~
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Yo Rosse
ReplyDeleteWhat happened to Odie?
The snowing thing really relates to the real world.
-Suzy
rosse! I like your entry, but try to post some thoughts about garfield so that it can be more suspensful and fun. it was funny when john had to come out naked to get his clothes! please writed some more! also, I like how you posted comics to make it more interesting...
ReplyDeleteYou sound like the real Garfield. You can be the author.
ReplyDeletehaha~!!^^
ReplyDeleteI like your entry!! It was catching my attention.
ReplyDeleteI like your format.
I like the comic that you post! It made it more interesting!^^
I think you should write about garfield's thoughts.
you sond like garfield!nice job have a great christmas by the way im a nice dog
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