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Monday, December 7, 2009

I LOVE LASAGNA!!!!<3


This is a secret...did u know that i LOVE lasagna?? or have a teddy bear?? i always have to have Pooky(my teddy bears name) to go to sleep or when I'm bored but, in the comic book i kick Odie when I'm bored. I like to kick Odie but talking to Pooky is way better.Pooky knows how i really feel. About the lasagna...don't tell this to John i ate all his lasagna today....it was supposed to be his dinner with his future GIRLFRIEND(my Doctor.) What should i do?? i am soworried what John would say...what should i do??
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11 comments:

  1. PicoDecember 7, 2009 at 3:38 AM

    Hey Garfield~ Im gonna tell John!!! Ha-Ha that was a good story. It tells all about Garfield (I guess).

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  2. AnonymousDecember 7, 2009 at 4:17 AM

    Did u know I LOVE LASagna TO

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  3. AnonymousDecember 8, 2009 at 1:16 AM

    Your story is really fun! Though to make it better I think it would be good if you had sensory details.

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  4. GarfieldDecember 8, 2009 at 4:42 PM

    Thnx guys~!!<3

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  5. Mon-a-neeDecember 9, 2009 at 12:26 AM

    Yo, Garfield, follow me

    http://monaneediary.blogspot.com/

    hohoho

    -dog

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  6. Matilda's diaryDecember 9, 2009 at 4:08 AM

    rosse, I liked how you showed Garfield's feelings toward other animals and John's girlfriend. catch your spelling and grammar!

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  7. Matilda's diaryDecember 9, 2009 at 4:40 PM

    your blog captured my attention. but, it did not follow the elements of the narrative essay format. If you write more, i'm sure you'll follow the elements. It was funny, and interesting. (Mr.Smith, this is the REAL response)

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  8. MadisonCzopekDecember 10, 2009 at 1:08 AM

    Rosse I did not think your blog followed the format of a narritive essay. The intorduction was not one that pulled me in to read the story. I wish it was a longer entry. To improve you should watch your spelling and grammer. I know when typing we make mistakes, but it helps to reread your blog entry/comments. I really did like how well you explained the feelings ofd Garfield, but try to get more action in the blog too.
    -Madison Czopek (Mr. Smith this is a real response)

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  9. Mon-a-neeDecember 10, 2009 at 2:17 AM

    hey, rosse... It is funny, but I think you are trying to put alot of sensory details here, since Mr. Smith told us to. However, why don't you put some other details?? Also, are these in choronical order?? I suggest it should be. Keep up your work!!!

    -Dog-

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  10. AnonymousDecember 10, 2009 at 4:42 PM

    Rosse, your blog didn't capture my attention. It didn't have an introduction, body, or a conclusion. I liked your picture of garfeild though. Make your blogs longer. (no offense)

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  11. SANDPAWDecember 12, 2009 at 6:21 PM

    HI ROSSE.... your blog kind of interested me... but I think you can make it MUCH more better by adding more ensory details or more action details. I actually really couldn't see the intro, body, and conclusion... maybe you can improve this. I liked the picture and the humor of your blog entry-- but I guess you can make it longer.

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